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    The Art Colony and related sites are just a modern day book with photos

    please share our address here with others as a book

    and its a book by donation mostly yet we sell subscriptions to forums

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  • REPRESSION is COMMUNISM! BODY AUTONOMY for ALL

    https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Category:Communist_repression

     

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    In service to a great nation, I gave nearly my all. My soul for God and Country! Your Psychological Warrior for the war effort. MK-Donald/donna

  • While there are eternal truths such as gravity exists but why? (theory/model/faith) yet life is a series of half-truths that create an understanding or an illusion of preference  for each of us when added up making what some call that faith theory or modeling.

  • My personal opinion is that I am HALF right, and you are HALF wrong.
    DKMeek the Magician 19@nodkeem

  •  perhaps we are all conservatives yet we take the things that are offbeat and outcast at times and propose a better life that is more inclusive of the individuals in a society that is the liberal way

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(Alternate title: "An Enthralling Narrator")

I'm so glad to have re-acquainted myself with the delightful characters of Man and Woman after being so long apart. Let me know below if you notice any mistakes or any areas that could use tweaking or any jokes that made you chuckle.

Also, which title do you prefer (and why)?

The style of the skit is in the Absurdist genre, so the dialogue is not meant to sound natural or realistic. At the same time, I wouldn't want audience members/readers to feel as though there's any unnecessary fluff. Which line(s) seem like they're overly indulgent, in terms of wordiness and/or redundancy?

Does the conflict build up enough for the ridiculous stakes to matter to you at all? Does the conflict's resolution satisfy?

How well do the formatting choices (e.g., italics, text size, alignment) support the reading experience of the script? What changes would you suggest to improve legibility?

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  • Idiocracy would not relate Repression to Communism due to their years of training by the misdirecting repressors.
    .Raydon.

  • In my opinion, I am HALF right, and you are HALF wrong. Let's part ways. Each of us is taking our HALF LIFE in peace.
    Peach On Herb says Be Anointed with Kenah Bosum and seeking you will find HEAVEN is at hand.
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