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There is a great idea for a challenge what's details can be read here:  akrasiel.deviantart.com/journa…

I must say that, I'm not a native English speaker and althoug, sometimes I use to write poems, but in my native language (Hungaryian) but it's hard to do it in diferent language, but it was fun to try at least :)

I choosed this poem from Ogura Hayakunin Isshu to write a tanka trying to continuing this original Japanese poem:

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Lady Sanuki

Like a rock at sea, 
At ebb-tide hidden from view, 
Is my tear-drenched sleeve: 

Never for a moment dry, 
And no one knows it is there.

(二条院讃岐


わが袖は 
潮干に見えぬ 
沖の石の 


人こそしらね 
かはくまもなし )

Firstly, I did a traditional entry to the original poem. You can found it here: deidara1444.deviantart.com/art…
Edited wersion is here: deidara1444.deviantart.com/art…

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